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Ausiàs Tsel's avatar

You keep the thing offstage the whole way and it costs you nothing. The lift opening on its own, the weight shifting in the dark, never shown. The reader builds the worst of it without you. Curious how much you'll reveal in Part 2, or whether you'll hold.

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Love the use of darkness and weight here 🖤

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